LinkedIn Feedback & Makeovers - Freebie for OzBargain

phamid on 10/12/2017 - 06:17
Last edited 12/12/2017 - 11:44

Hey Everyone,

I found LinkedIn useful for a dynamic and versatile resume online.

After realising I have a knack for tuning up and making over LinkedIn profiles, I wanted to offer my services as a freebie!

In return this will help me structure out my commericalisation and feasibility for whether it's worth doing and how much it will cost.

An example of mine is available here (always welcome to feedback too!)

https://www.linkedin.com/in/phamid/

Update:

I've been overwhelmed with the support, an additional queue has been added and will be batched throughout the month.

My friend, @megasaletime, is heavily experienced in HR, workshops and presentations. He's offered his time with the profiles and also resumes here.

TLDR:

LinkedIn for best effort queue (31-100 profile requests) via this form

Additional questions, you can reach me here or [email protected]

Education & Work

Comments

  • unicorn888 on 10/12/2017 - 06:33

    count me in mate ^_^

  • spal on 10/12/2017 - 06:45

    Me too mate.

  • wellglued14 on 10/12/2017 - 06:57

    Yes please :)

  • MeesusEff on 10/12/2017 - 06:58

    Would like to be considered too :)

  • Chridim on 10/12/2017 - 07:49

    Yes Please :)

  • smuggler on 10/12/2017 - 08:12

    brew, what's with the job hopping?

    • [Deactivated] on 10/12/2017 - 18:25

      Looks fine to me.
      A couple of 1-2 year positions there.
      Most of the changes are going up, not sideways by the quick skim.

  • Chewie on 10/12/2017 - 08:37

    8 mutual connections!

  • evgpek on 10/12/2017 - 08:44

    Yes please!

  • Mummy2 on 10/12/2017 - 09:29

    Yes please.

  • Qroozn on 10/12/2017 - 10:26

    Yes please

  • theHMASfriendship on 10/12/2017 - 10:35
    +23

    No thanks

  • tgpraveen on 10/12/2017 - 11:45

    Yes please

  • Briefcase Mong on 10/12/2017 - 12:03

    Yep :)

  • someguy102 on 10/12/2017 - 12:10

    Yes please!

  • Djent on 10/12/2017 - 12:14

    Yes please!

  • kds123 on 10/12/2017 - 13:26

    sounds good count me in

  • whatthecrappin on 10/12/2017 - 14:05

    Yes please!

    • phamid on 11/12/2017 - 18:47

      Attempted to message, appears you cannot accept new DMs.

  • Dpkmax on 10/12/2017 - 14:46

    count me in too Cheers

  • hashtagbargain on 10/12/2017 - 15:54

    I'm interested in knowing what you have to offer. PM me!

  • [Deactivated] on 10/12/2017 - 16:16

    Yeah dude

  • tumsum on 10/12/2017 - 16:41

    yes pls

  • toristo on 10/12/2017 - 16:44

    Very keen. Thanks!

  • huybo on 10/12/2017 - 17:02

    keen.!

  • huybo on 10/12/2017 - 17:02

    Yes

  • davidmwilliams on 10/12/2017 - 19:18

    Do you have your limit yet? If not I am keen also ! Thanks.

  • billy3000 on 10/12/2017 - 19:22

    Me too pls!

  • sky blu on 11/12/2017 - 00:17
    +1

    It's knack.

    • retiredfeline on 11/12/2017 - 09:51
      +1

      That's why the takers will probably only get a reebie.

    • phamid on 11/12/2017 - 12:19

      Thanks for picking up on it!

  • rtk74 on 11/12/2017 - 06:57

    B..but I don't have one.

  • apairofsocks on 11/12/2017 - 09:46

    o/

    • phamid on 11/12/2017 - 18:54

      Attempted to message, appears you cannot accept new DMs.

  • Kingfabay on 11/12/2017 - 10:09

    Im also interested!

  • schmuppet on 11/12/2017 - 10:13

    Count me in buddy.

  • Ozabc on 11/12/2017 - 10:27

    Me too

  • Danger on 11/12/2017 - 10:36

    In

  • CheapCoffee on 11/12/2017 - 10:47

    Not sure if 30 is up but feel free to have a look at mine :)

  • MrMeow on 11/12/2017 - 10:54

    me to!

  • Mikinoz on 11/12/2017 - 10:56

    I checked your example, it's interesting how you refer to yourself as in the third person. I'm not sure I would have used that, Otherwise pretty good.

    • phamid on 11/12/2017 - 12:18

      It’s something I was experimenting and asking feedback for. Curious as to your take on it was, third person seemed more objective, whist first person appeared actionable and personal.

      • Mikinoz on 11/12/2017 - 13:07

        True the third person does have a more resume style feel, I'm still undecided if I like my LinkedIn profile to be a resume or a conduit for business connections. I guess it depends on where you are at, either looking for a new role or expanding your network.

        As an Ozbargainer its a really nice thing that you are doing.

  • Hashstrid on 11/12/2017 - 11:02

    Would love to!

  • rushil01 on 11/12/2017 - 11:07
    +1

    If there are still spots then I'd very much be interested.

  • Ghosteye on 11/12/2017 - 11:10

    Would be interested if there are still slots!

  • Cheemeister on 11/12/2017 - 11:41

    If the offer is open I'll be happy for help - I signed up and haven't done anything with mine.

  • bansid on 11/12/2017 - 11:59

    Count me too.

  • stingy-oz on 11/12/2017 - 12:03

    bummer…i missed it? Count me in!

  • kendoggs on 11/12/2017 - 12:06

    Would love you to have a look at my profile. Interested if its still available

  • phamid on 11/12/2017 - 12:09
    +3

    Thanks everyone for the responses! Since 30 have been allocated, the additional will be queued and considered as best effort. I don’t want to promise the remainder and fall through on them.

    The first 30 will get a DM shortly today!

    • stingy-oz on 12/12/2017 - 09:55

      Thanks regardless

  • itsDANNY on 11/12/2017 - 12:16

    If still additional slots to be queued, very interested, many thanks

  • CurryPuff on 11/12/2017 - 12:21

    Very interested mate. Been wanting to make a linkedin profile, but don't know where to start.

  • Piggybank1 on 11/12/2017 - 12:46

    Very interested! Please consider my profile.

  • joe22 on 11/12/2017 - 12:50

    Slots still available, would be very interested! Or even some feedback, thanx!

  • Ozk1 on 11/12/2017 - 13:35

    Yes please, very interested. Thanks

  • Dr Techno on 11/12/2017 - 13:40

    Interested, add me to the list (if at all possible)

  • aph1985 on 11/12/2017 - 13:46

    Very interested, please count me in

  • [Deactivated] on 11/12/2017 - 14:01

    Very interested, please count me in

  • Nick939 on 11/12/2017 - 14:09

    Add me to the que. Thank you.

    • retiredfeline on 11/12/2017 - 16:39

      que?

      • Nick939 on 12/12/2017 - 02:05

        The English spelling of queue is skew. I despise it. Barbequeue?

  • AceIsMe on 11/12/2017 - 14:12

    Also very interested. Count me in please. :)

  • victorheaven on 11/12/2017 - 15:12

    Thanks OP, count me in please.

  • pointy1 on 11/12/2017 - 15:25

    Im Keen, Add me to que as well.

    Thanks

  • nomunny on 11/12/2017 - 16:24

    Count me in

  • bugb on 11/12/2017 - 16:24

    Count me in as well please

  • cisco on 11/12/2017 - 16:26

    Yes please

  • Poseidon on 11/12/2017 - 16:26

    Please add me to the que, if you get this far :)

  • funky on 11/12/2017 - 16:49

    Also interested in joining the queue

  • Gina Rinehart on 11/12/2017 - 16:55
    +2

    If you're after feedback, I'd probably suggest removing the 2008 help desk role from your profile. It doesn't align with your skills and just adds to the long list of companies (which IMO should be a bit more concise)

    Otherwise not bad/10

    • phamid on 12/12/2017 - 10:24

      Thanks for picking that up! I've removed the role.

  • jimbargain on 11/12/2017 - 17:06

    I'm also interested, cheers

  • [Deactivated] on 11/12/2017 - 17:10

    Very very interested. Need it big time.

  • mafmouf on 11/12/2017 - 17:14

    Perfect 5/7.

  • Shenoy on 11/12/2017 - 17:17

    Please add me in mate

  • robbo600 on 11/12/2017 - 17:30

    I'd love to if you have any spare time :)

  • wiipantz on 11/12/2017 - 17:53

    I'd also like to add me to the best effort list :) What's needed from me?

  • G-Dawg on 11/12/2017 - 18:09

    Great idea - I'm interested too! :)

  • marka on 11/12/2017 - 18:13

    Sure

  • footyboy on 11/12/2017 - 18:15

    In.

  • jesseb05 on 11/12/2017 - 18:31

    Yes please

  • phamid on 11/12/2017 - 18:35
    +1

    Update: Anyone underneath ozabc (danger and below) will be in the best effort queue.

    Whilst I'd love to help out everyone, I'm assuming each profile will be 2.5hrs work, being 75hrs work scheduled.

    The form for the best effort queue is here: https://goo.gl/forms/kfsg0MrYeN3Cvmm52

  • phamid on 11/12/2017 - 18:58
    +1

    All DMs have been sent to the first 30 with the first form, you'll need to enter your username so I can queue accordingly.

    Thank you for the support everyone, I appreciate it heaps!

  • hell0 on 11/12/2017 - 19:53
    -2

    I don't have a Link'd In. Please delete deal.

  • Shadowsfury on 11/12/2017 - 20:06

    Interestingo offer, will add myself to queue

  • frazel on 11/12/2017 - 21:43

    I'm interested too

  • droodle on 11/12/2017 - 21:59

    Any more for any more??

  • JuryWheel on 11/12/2017 - 22:21

    Love all the buzz words!!

  • D6C1 on 11/12/2017 - 22:39

    me me me me me me!! count me in!

  • Sundubu on 11/12/2017 - 23:09

    Interested if there's a free spot :)

  • pspaan on 12/12/2017 - 01:30

    O dear, lot of people are interested. Maybe you can raffle it under all these people.

    But, what a nice gesture. Thank u!

    Peter

  • phamid on 12/12/2017 - 01:38
    +1

    Update: I have my friend and housemate Aaron join in and provide his expertise with this too! This means the current best effort queue will be batched. We'll cap the sign up soon so we can get going.

    In the spirit of working to brush up resumes (in conjunction) he wanted to assist those alone.

    Details below:

    Hey Everyone,

    After having reviewed resumes for 100s of friends, colleagues, and students I have a knack for reviewing them As such I want to offer to review your resume as a freebie.

    After working in both a university careers service as well as having hired multiple interns, volunteers, and staff members across various organisations I know that resumes are a challenge for many.

    I am doing this because I have been inspired by my friend @epicsaletime who is helping out 30 OzBargan users in reviewing their LinkedIn profiles. We are having a friendly challenge between us because we want to see how we can potentially make this service commercially viable and we want to to help as many people as possible in the process

    I can send you an example of my resume on request and my LinkedIn is also viewable at the link below

    https://www.linkedin.com/in/aaronngan

    Important Guidelines: Replace any personal details that you would like as follows: [Email] [mobile] etc.

    The following things should also never be in your resume, please take them out before you send your resume:
    - Date of Birth
    - Home Address
    - Gender
    - Religion
    - Ethnicity

    These things cannot be part of any hiring decision but avoiding any subconscious bias is in your best interest.

    I will message all commenters with more information, all the best!

    [email protected]

    • sugardumpling on 12/12/2017 - 08:24

      Hey Aaron, I am interested… is there any spot left?

      • audeamus on 12/12/2017 - 11:08

        Hi there! I'm back, and yes, I will PM you

        • audeamus on 12/12/2017 - 11:12

          Actually @sugardumpling can you PM me?

          I'm new to this OzBargain thing and they are throttling my account for now until I get more experience on here)

        • sugardumpling on 12/12/2017 - 15:40

          @megasaletime: Hey it said 'User megasaletime does not accept new conversations.' :(

  • naru6705 on 12/12/2017 - 01:43

    I'm interested in this too, If offer is still available

  • audz on 12/12/2017 - 07:17

    Yes please :)
    I've submitted the form.

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