Hi Guys,
I just created a game in android called Toddler and Baby Games.
https://play.google.com/store/apps/details?id=com.andioapps.…
Just want your feedback about it. There are 5 games available. They are
** First Words
Learn their first words. Eight categories available to choose.
** Numbers
Learn basic numbers, counting, sequence numbers and missing number.
** Memory Game
Remember the position of images they just open (flip card memory game)
** Animal Sounds
Listen to the animal sounds, a good learn for them before go to zoo.
** Guess Pictures
Guess the picture by opening each card to reveal partly of the image.
Thanks
andy
Well, some spelling and grammatical errors, eg. "Does your toddler start saying some words and keen to learn new things?.." should read "Does your toddler start saying some words and is keen to learn new things?" Or "Is your toddler starting to saying some words and is keen to learn new things?" Another is 'Varities' which I suppose is 'varieties'? Spelling of languages Portuguese, Indonesian, and Polish all need fixing as well and that is just looking at the description of the app as I did not bother to download it.
Your description above is clumsy too. "** Animal Sounds
Listen to the animal sounds, a good learn for them before go to zoo.
** Guess Pictures
Guess the picture by opening each card to reveal partly of the image."
Seeing these sort of errors probably would probably influence sales of the app.